Saturday, July 2, 2011

Irrelevant information?

I think I could do an entire blog just on news teasers. Here's tonight's:


Plus, a car, possibly linked to a homicide, is located.


According to the rules of commas, we can take out "possibly linked to a homicide" without changing the meaning of the sentence. Therefore, the teaser for this news story could read:

Plus, a car is located.

Now that's a story worth reading.

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