OK, we all get this one, right? And I'm not going to share every example of this because people do it so often that I'd just go insane. But for some reason this one struck me as particularly confusing:
He attaches a handmade metal hoop to his head lined with bulky sensors.
After a minute I understood that the metal hoop must have bulky sensors. But who knows? Maybe his head is lined with bulky sensors. Given the writing I have so far experienced with this one, anything is possible.
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