Is that really how you want to phrase that?

I'm editing for a husband and wife with a construction contracting business. The husband had this to say:


There’s just something magical when somebody takes what you’ve done for them and you give them something and they swallow. When they swallow, that means they accept.


And the response from the wife:


I also think that is a really nice way to say to people, “Thank you for your business.”


Yeah...